Thank you for ordering Screenwriting Style That Sizzles.  This book spells out specific elements in your screenplay that will need to be rewritten in your edit/polish stage in order to create compelling reading. You will find that if you follow my specific suggestions your script will fall easier on the eyes.

Click on the following link and Enjoy!

http://raineyscriptconsulting.com/?p=387

Talk soon!

John

P.S. If you wish to discuss some element specific to your script, please call. I’ll be happy to talk to you.